A lyrical sketch about fracture, direction, and the quiet pull forward

(Here’s the Link to the Studio Version)
This piece started as a stark image: a road with its guidance gone. The language came quickly—short lines, hard consonants, lots of white space—like reflective paint scuffed off the asphalt. I leaned into the eerie at first: narrow intervals, airless reverb, and a pulse that felt like holding your breath.
Then I softened it—just a little. I wanted the strangeness to remain, but with a hint of invitation. The result is still uneasy, yet more neutral in color: the edges rounded, a soft light at the end of the lane. Not “major-key happy,” more optimistically intriguing—as if the road might bend toward somewhere worth going.
Lyrics (highlight)
in the middle of the roadway
theres a broken mast
in the middle of the roadway
rud less to the task
painting in the roadway
grassless in the past
fault no lines of roadway
quake filled seismograph
From eerie to “strange-neutral”
- Harmony: I kept the minor contours but swapped a few cold clusters for open voicings; a small lift in the final cadence nudges the ear forward.
- Rhythm: The pulse still staggers (on purpose), but the syncopations breathe more—less claustrophobic, more curious.
- Tone/space: The early version had a glassy chill; the current take adds a slight warmth in the midrange, so the voice sits closer, human, imperfect.
Companion piece
Right after writing this, I tracked an instrumental echo of the idea—“Flight Lanes of Morphed Names.” It follows the same weather system but speaks without words. I’ll be posting that alongside this, so you can hear how the feeling translates from lyric to guitar figure and back.
Thanks for listening and for spending time in these liminal places with me.
—Josh
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(Here’s the link to the original posted edition on Youtube)
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